I, a
Humanities major with an emphasis in CES (Comparative Ethnic Studies), critical
race theory and history, was really excited knowing we had a project with the
topic of language and power [a
list of three appositives, set off with commas to describe myself and my
major’s specialties]. Being comfortable and feeling ease, it was nice to know that in a class
that is out of my region, there is a section that I feel like I can really do my
own thing [two back-to-back
present-participle phrases; the participles work well here, since they reflect
my constant state of action through the process of this project]. I have always found it
interesting that language has such a stronghold of power and can influence all
of society and alternate cultures to fit another. I would like to research how
Standard English has power and why it is, specifically within the educational
institution. I want to know why it
takes form in power and influences such an assimilation process and whom it
affects as it does. I believe this is a relevant topic for every future
educator because educators are at the forefront of that influence whether they
know it or not.
As we did the Tea Party exercise, I got really excited and
also frustrated. I got excited because I love hearing other people’s stories.
As a future educator, I want to be able to fix the problem or to eliminate ways
that the problem can come into my own classroom so that history doesn’t repeat
itself. I did get frustrated putting myself in other people’s shoes because I
was hearing true stories of how language and violence was used as power to
eliminate tradition and cultures. I saw potential for the future and I was
upset that if oppression of language is still in affect…is this really the
world I want to live in. And so I thought, yes. Yes because I would like to
educate my students on the power they hold and how they can use that power for
good or bad.
This research project, even though it is
shorter than what I am used to, I have a lot of ways to thrive through this
topic. Mainly because I am in a classroom full of future educators-there are
ways my research can assist my peers. As we all will be educators, I think the
whole class would benefit from having research done by a peer so that they have
some connection towards this issue instead of re-reading articles (even though
I love them myself). There are ways to know what institutional influence has on
our teaching and it is importance to develop knowledge on what it looks like.
Standard English and units of grammar (for example) has dominant effect in the
classroom yet has no reason to overpower someone else's language. It is
important to acknowledge how it happens so that it’s easier to eliminate the
problem that was set when we were in school and even when our parents and
grandparents were in school.
Here is a bit of an
outline for my paper and research:
·
Introduction:
o Thesis
§
Still working on it**
·
Paragraph one:
o Historical
introduction with a story
§
Use one of the Tea Party stories and connect it
to historical context of the issue
·
Paragraph two:
o What
issues come up within the educational institution that should be addressed
§
Use article to identify issues
·
Paragraph three:
o How
to address the issue of Standard English in the classroom to eliminate
oppression and assimilation of other cultures and languages.
§
Use articles to determine how to do so
I experimented with the
patterns I used because I have never really purposely put them into my writing,
and I barely never put them in my writing without thinking about it. I think I incorporated it well, maybe
not 100% correct but I did my best J.
I would like to experiment with it more because I really like how it changes up
written work. I would just like to know if I did it somewhat correctly.
I really liked your way of using the three appositives in the listing way. It was a nice switch up from the colon or the semicolon.
ReplyDeleteI really like your organization so far for the paper. I think the topics you have each paragraph is a nice set up for the paper and will make for a progressive reading. It has nice layering. Maybe an idea for your thesis could be along he lines of how standard edited American English has oppressed your specific tea party example?